10). Zsasz (Batman franchise)
Boring
9). Fred (Scooby-Doo franchise)
Bland
8). General Grievous (Star Wars franchise excluding 2003 cartoon)
Incompetent
7). Cosmo (The Fairy Oddparents)
Before you read this, I am going to be talking about the story so if you haven't read it and you want to, THIS IS A SPOILER WARNING!!!
Also very strong language in this rant.
So, I'm just gonna shit talk my story, and if you liked it (If you liked it I'm assuming your messing with me), don't read this, or do, I couldn't care less.
First of all, the story in general is all over the place and half the time it doesn't even make any sense.
Story review #18: Diamonds of Starburst —by Lula-Crystal.
Character’s:
Disclaimer; I’m only cover Trixie and Stardust
because this gif has a lot of characters and they are the core characters.
Story Review #21: Embrace Your Demon —by EileenSaysHi
A reward for getting 3rd place in the Sunset x EG/MLP Villains “Bad Romance” contest!
Character’s:
Sunset Shimmer: You can really feel just how F’ed up this whole situation is and the hopelessness of her impending death followed by her possession. And despite its darker tone this story depicts Sunset in the most canon way it possibly can. Everything about it from her lines, emotions, to even her despair is very well executed.
Story Review #22: It’s Just Us —by Spyder27
Reward for winning one of the competition’s in the Sunset X Villain competition group!
Character’s:
Adagio Dazzle:
Story review: #28 The Sun and the Star
—by General Alduin
Characters:
Sunset Shimmer: I really like the way you highlight who Sunset is in this story it feels very organic. And I appreciate the amount of characterization we get for her in such a short run-time.
Starlight Glimmer: This alternate human version of Starlight is interesting….
…..because although she is very similar to the Starlight in the pony world/the canon she also isn’t.
Well, episode 100 happened. It was a thing. Was it a good or bad thing? I ain't saying here! Read below the page break, ya bum! And to those of you who haven't watched the episode, watch it! Then you, too, can become one of those people screaming that it was the best/worst thing ever!
Story Review #20: Void —by Bicyclette
A reward for getting 3rd in Sunset Shimmer x Starlight Glimmer Shipping Contest (I’m really late posting this 
)
Character’s:
Story Review #24 A Shimmering Heartbreak —by Spyder27
Reward for winning a competition in the Sunset X Villain competition group and a continuation of the previous story I reviewed making this the logical next step plus I kinda wanted to see where this went.
Disclaimer:
I recommend reading the story and the first one as well along with Story review #23 since this is kind of a continuation of that review since it’s the same saga.
Character’s:
(Theirs a lot to cover)
Story review #26 Milkshakes, Marionettes, and Midnight —by EileenSaysHi
Characters:
Twilight Sparkle: I love her characterization in this story so much it is so incredibly in canon but it somehow makes her more human the way she tries to check on the Milkshakes or tries walking to the bathroom to avoid confrontation and blames everything on herself being weak is wonderfully written. I also love her awkward Adorakble dynamic with shiny.
Story Review #23: A Dazzling World —by Spyder27
Reward for winning a competition in the Sunset X Villain competition group and also because I love reading Spyder27’s Sundagio stories!!!
Character’s:
Adagio Dazzle: 5 little word can encapsulate her in this story: Character development, Relatable, Poverty, GAY!!!!!
Chapter 16:
“It’s not a loss until you quit!” I exclaimed.
Victory or death! —Sweetie Belle probably
They shook their heads. It was obvious that I was losing them. Still, our goal was to gain our cutie marks, and we had to see the mission through together. I couldn’t let them abandon me in my time of need. I had to—make them stay in the water!
Why do they have to stay in the water?
*Suspicion intensifies*
Story review #27 The Dragon Sisters —by Mechazilla88 & Co-Writer Phantom-Dragon
(Requested by Mechazilla88)
Characters:
Disclaimer: I’m only gonna be covering the most important/present characters in this fic since it has a lot of characters
Spike: I like him but I’m really gonna need him to show me more in future chapter because I don’t feel I have a ton to go off of. But his characterization and sympathy make me interested in what could happen next for him as a protagonist.
Chapter 22: Magic training
Boulders? Why are there boulders in front of Twilight’s castle?
Should we really be surprised by Twilight’s strange choice in this universe?? 
Chapter 19:
“Wow! The crack is totally gone now. To be honest, I was kind of worried about it. I even asked my brother if horns can heal if they break and he said nope. But never mind that! When did you find out that you can use magic again?”
*evil laughter intensifies*
Apple Bloom facehooved. “From our class!”
Be more specific Applebloom 
even I as a reader thought you meant the first ever 
Story review #19: Sweetie Belle Gains a Soul —by Bad Dragon
Buckle up everyone this is going to be a long one!!
Characters:
Disclaimer: I’m only gonna be covering the most important/present characters in this fic since it has a lot of characters
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Chapter 26-29: I had read all these chapter and written a segment for each of them but my computer erased it due to unknown error. I could’ve tried to recreate it or re-do it but that felt wrong so I’ll summarize what I remember saying.
I felt like Sweeties but parents could’ve handled the situation better and tried to calm her down after she threw dad instead of antagonizing her more. I understood their actions but it was a dumb call.
This was a pretty sweet episode. Nothing spectacular, just enjoyable. Nothing much else to be said, but as the new writers grow, we might get something as interesting as it is sweet. Unto the thoughts~
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